~ the whispering brook ~

the brook

… it ran and purled. (Stella L.)

In a winter
half-like autumn
half-like spring,
I found a trickling brook.

It spoke with little drops
and little whispers.
It didn’t brag.

It went its way
towards a larger lake
halting, stopping –
then it ran and purled.

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2 thoughts on “~ the whispering brook ~

  1. … purl, purl, quickquick, purl …

    excellent

  2. stellawrote says:

    thank you. I wanted movement and meaning.

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