I saw myself sleeping.
… sleeping alone.
… sleeping without you.
… sleeping awake.
I saw myself falling.
… falling in your eyes.
… falling in mine.
… falling up steps.
I saw myself screaming.
… screaming for you.
… screaming to have you.
… screaming dead silent.
I saw myself crying.
… crying because of you.
… crying because of myself.
… crying a sharp smile.
I saw myself dying.
… dying alone.
… dying beside you.
… dying in front of everyone.
nice structure; nice habitation
thank you. i’m fond of paralelism and repetition. i feel it creates an interesting backbone of sound to the meaning i’m trying to put forward